Friday, February 15, 2019

Dethroning the King - Chapter 9 (DRAFT) - Two on One


Dethroning the King
An original story by Jayse and D.

Chapter 9 - Two on One

The day of the match finally arrives. The arena is absolutely packed to capacity. The champion, Zach “The King” Sorenson enters the arena first, eliciting thunderous applause. The silk robe he’s wearing does little to hide his heroic muscular size, and he has a look of focus and determination on his achingly handsome face. He enters the ring accompanied by Ian and several other staff from his gym. They help him disrobe, revealing his spectacular body to the wildly cheering and adoring crowd. Zach is completely naked except for his regulation red wrestling trunks, the tight-fitting lycra fabric hugging every bulge and curve of his fantastically muscular ass and his gigantic cock and balls. 

The Annihilator enters next, the huge man eliciting both cheers and boos from the audience. A cocky sneer is on the huge man’s ruggedly handsome face as he struts his way to the ring. When he disrobes, he reveals a physique that is even more insanely massive than ever, for he now carries 420 pounds of bloated, swollen muscle on his 6-foot, 6-inch frame. Clearly, this muscle beast has been working out in preparation for this grudge match! 

Lastly, the Reaper is finally revealed to the crowd after much fanfare, and both Zach and the audience get their first look at the 7-foot, 2-inch giant. An iron mask covers the entirety of the Reaper’s face, showing only the hard, merciless stare of his brown eyes. A black silk robe covers a body that is so enormous that it defies description. When the Reaper enters the ring and lets the robe fall, even Zach’s beautiful hazel eyes widen in surprise and shock at the sheer unearthly SIZE of the muscular giant. The Reaper is so colossally huge and muscular that his 7-foot, 2-inch  tall and 525-pound body actually dwarfs the champion’s 6-foot, 3-inch and 365-pound Adonis-like form. 

While all of this is going on, the mole in Zach’s own team secretly opens a hidden vial of clear fluid, the serum that had been provided to him by Gustav’s scientists. Though he was instructed to only pour 1 cc of this fluid into Zach’s water bottle, he empties the entire 10 cc vial into the large water bottle, an evil smirk playing across his face as he does so. The tasteless, colorless, and odorless serum is quickly mixed with the champion’s water, and the bottle placed back at ringside with no one the wiser. 

Introductions are made, rules are described (LOL - what rules?!), and the fighters take their corners. Ian leans in to his best friend and mentor and starts giving Zach words of advice and encouragement, passing the huge muscle man his water bottle. Zach’s eyes remained locked on his opponents, but he listens closely to Ian’s every word, opening up the water bottle and taking a large swig of the cold water within. 

The bell chimes, and the match begins. 

******** Now, I’m not good at writing blow-by-blow wrestling stories, so I’m hoping one of you can do so. This chapter needs to highlight Zach’s terrific strength and skill in the ring, for he is able to outmatch and outfight not just one, but TWO enormous, dirty-fighting opponents who far exceed him in size and mass. I really love the idea that both the Annihilator and the Reaper are so much bigger than Zach, with the Reaper in particular being the product of military-grade genetic engineering, and STILL Zach is stronger and tougher! (The muscle giant was produced from the sperm of countless studs, but Zach’s natural genetics are still far, far superior…which is why Gustav so desperately wants the stud’s prime genetic material.) That way, it’s even more impressive when mighty Zach lays both huge men out in the first 2-on-1 match. Even though the big muscle stud is smaller than either of his opponents, he quickly proves that he is both stronger and faster than either of the larger men. 

Both the Annihilator and the Reaper need to land some terrific blows on Zach in the course of the fight, because I need to show just how tough Zach really is. He shrugs off each and every blow, even the cruel punches, kicks, knees, elbows, and upper cuts into his unprotected testicles, and continues pummeling both of his opponents into eventual submission. 

Zach shocks Gustav and rocks the UFT world when he succeeds in besting both of those gigantic studs in the most colossal battle in UFT history. And Zach wins despite taking multiple long drinks of water from his tainted water bottle, and fighting off the effects of the serum long into the match. 

In fact, the serum seems to do nothing to the huge muscle man for a good long time, much to the Annihilator’s and Reaper’s great concern (as they are in on the entire plan), as well as Gustav’s own worry and consternation. It’s not until at least halfway through the match that Zach starts feeling dizzy and light headed, and notices that he’s getting slower and weaker, if only by a little bit. Nevertheless, the handsome stud digs deep and continues fighting, in the end overcoming and defeating both of his opponents, despite their constant cheating and ganging up on him! 

The crowd goes absolutely wild at this turn of events, the applause and screaming almost deafening, and echoed throughout the rest of the sprawling city of New Angeles. Almost every resident, from the vast poor population to even most of the rarefied elites, had been rooting for the handsome hero, and they are overjoyed at his success. 

Gustav Billings, however, is visibly furious. But the Supreme Leader has a back up plan. He urges the crowd to silence and then smiles benevolently down upon the panting and winded champion. Gustav then offers another challenge, a “double or nothing” proposal, offering Zach uncontested control over a huge section of the barrio — in essence, setting Zach up at the leader of his own nation-state within the larger nation-state of New Angeles — if he can win in another fight. And THIS time, he’ll have THREE opponents:  the Annihilator, the Reaper, and a brand new, never-before-seen opponent, the Kingslayer. 

A tired and panting Zach looks to his corner for advice, only to find that Ian and the rest of his team has been whisked away by UFT officials while he wasn’t looking. The big stud realizes that he is on his own at that point, and though he’s unexpectedly tired, he realizes that the prize offered by Supreme Leader Billings is simply too great to refuse. After a few more moment’s consideration, Zach once again meets Gustav’s eyes and agrees to the match. Another round of thunderous cheers echo throughout the vast auditorium. 

But with the serum continuing to perform its quiet, evil work inside Zach’s bloodstream, can the handsome hero possibly hope to win against THREE opponents?!? ********



Okay guys! Here’s where YOU all come in! I’d LOVE to have you guys send me drafts of how you’d flesh out this chapter, and the first match between Zach and the Reaper and Annihilator. Even just suggestions for specific scenes within the epic battle would be super appreciated. I don’t intend to submit the next unfinished chapter until Friday of NEXT week, which gives you all a full week to submit ideas in the comments section. Also, feel free to post your personal email address in the comments section — I promise not to post your email address on the blog, so you can remain anonymous if you wish. 

Looking forward to hearing from you guys! :D



20 comments:

  1. So...the serum has weakened him, but it will also send his nuts into over drive is that right? So we may see them expanding out of control and at risk of exploding?

    I’m also thinking that they can go to town on his right nut, just focus on that to weaken it as turn the right one to mush, I’ll be dragging it around - but then the serum actually starts pumping it back up like a miracle. Would love to see them trying to break his dick too - fisting the head and trying to bend it permanently

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    1. Hey there Matty! You are correct -- the serum is going to gradually weaken Zach, eventually allowing his evil opponents to gain the upper hand. The serum will also send his already legendary virility into overdrive. His sperm production rate is going to skyrocket, and his genitals will start to swell and grow as a result. He's already got the biggest set of cock and balls to ever grace a human male, and they're gonna get even BIGGER!

      And yes, there's a real risk of a catastrophic testicular explosion from Zach's out-of-control sperm production...particularly, say, if the young muscle bull isn't allowed to purge his bollocks of their heavy payload. ;)

      I'm definitely planning some serious cock torture as well, including bending and twisting his enormous and growing tool. Bending it right to the breaking point, in fact! >:)

      And holy shit, I never even THOUGHT that the combination of the serum and Zach's supreme genetics might result in their own unique side effects. Such as being able to rupture one of Zach's mighty nuts, shattering that mammoth orb and turning it into mush...and having those ruptured tissues still be alive and making even more cum!!! Hell, maybe the serum could even allow Zach's mighty teste to rebuild itself, healing even the worst and most brutal of rupturing injuries! Maybe Zach can even establish some sort of homeostasis with the serum -- his cock and balls inflate dramatically, his sperm production increases a thousand-fold...and then everything stabilizes. Maybe as long as Zach's magnificently muscular body is being constantly supplied with fluids and nutrients, he can survive indefinitely and pump out a near-infinite amount of powerful muscle spunk! Maybe Zach's nuts will truly become indestructible...at least of any abuse shy of slicing off his entire nutsac! >:)

      Cuz trust, my intent is that, by the end of the saga, Zach has nothing that defines him as a male left swinging between his monstrously muscular legs! Bwa-ha-haaa!!

      Seriously though, Matty, that was a brilliant suggestion, and I'd definitely like to incorporate it into the latter chapters, where the REAL ball busting begins!



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    2. Since getting Zack to ejaculate more volume in a shorter shorter time is going to be an issue maybe the scientists will have to think of some creative solutions like forcing a wider opening in Zacks piss hole or prolonged torturing his glans for increased stimulation.

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    3. Fuck, Chip, that's a hot idea! I love the idea of a cum tube expander, and overstimulating the swollen head of Zach's monster cock! Would a brillo pad be too severe...?

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  2. gonna have to think about what to send you. the fight scenes are not my specialty, but hopfuly something can be put together.

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    1. I'll look forward to any suggestions or snippets of text you can provide!

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  3. Here's to inspire you: ropes, ladder, various toys
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hULOJznV2tc
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LXsZfi5Ye8U at 2:55

    Great work

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    1. Thanks for these links!! I'm hoping they'll inspire some great descriptions of the upcoming battle in the arena! And if nothing else, they were very fun to watch. :D

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  4. Im thinking of when he is gang on and raped the seum effect leak into his opponent unknow to them. Then we have 4 set of balls for u to decide whoich should be bursted

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    1. Wow, that's ANOTHER great idea I never thought of!!! That certainly would be karma for the three brutal wrestlers, wouldn't it? To have their own bollocks doomed as well!

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    2. I m also thinking that the serum kick zach into overide and since he cock cant eject fast enough its force him to spill man milk

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    3. Oh yes, in the latter chapters, Zach's colossal bull cock will be drooling and spitting and shooting cum on a nearly continuous basis, barely able to eject the thick and chunky fluid as fast as his powerhouse balls can make it! :)

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  5. To whoever happens to be taking a crack at this, might I suggest incorporating the spladle? If you're not familiar, do an image search. You won't regret it ;)

    One of Zach's opponents gets him in the spladle, leaving him unable to defend his completely exposed groin. The other opponent is free to go to town.

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    1. That was indeed a new term for me, and Google images gave me some GREAT examples! :D

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  6. A few thoughts:

    Gustav Billings makes a in-person appearance and steps onto the arena to introduce the Kingslayer, who is in fact Ian. It is at this time, with the
    Annihilator, Reaper, Zach, all in the center of the arena awaiting Ian's entrance, that Gustav lets Zach know why he is starting to experience increased weakness and what he can anticipate hence forth, the countless uncontrollerabke ejacluations, eventual explosion of his testes and his inevitable demise. The audience of course is not privy to this information. As Ian steps into the actual arena, it is then that Gustav lets Zach know that he can thank Ian for slipping the serum into his water bottle, while pointing out to him that it will be the only water available to him as he experiences dehydration. The betrayal of his good friend Ian, to whom Gustav has contracted to turn over the championship, is yet another weapon against Zach, a weapon that strikes an entirely different kind of blow at Zach's mind and heart.

    As Gustav leaves the arena, it is completely enclosed in metal bars, including the top, creating a cage from which Zach can never escape He will have no option but to countlessly spill his seed in front of his fans, garnishing their disgust, and even if he wins the bout, he is sealed in his own tomb for all those interested to watch.

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    1. Well, I guess I didn't disguise THAT surprise very well! LOL! Yes, Ian is indeed the mole in Zach's gym, the one that procured Zach's sperm for the evil scientists, and the one who poisoned Zach's water bottle with the serum. And there's even MORE surprises ahead regarding handsome Ian! :D

      I like the idea of caging Zach within the arena, no matter the outcome.

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    2. Yes, much to Zach's surprise a cage drops above.

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  7. Would you mind if I show you some stories I really enjoyed?

    http://burstsbustsandpops.blogspot.com/2009/06/experiments-part-2.html?m=0
    http://burstsbustsandpops.blogspot.com/2013/07/the-classroom-biology-lesson-fgroupfm.html?m=1

    These two and your ‘deadwood - unmanning’ series are some of the hottest stories I’ve ever read. I don’t know why, but the idea of exploring the inner structure of hunk’s huge testicles and seeing how they work always makes me super hard.

    So, if I’m not being too rude, would you be so kind as to somehow incorporate these story concepts into your upcoming stories? I would love to see a story similar to the deadwood.

    And as always, thank you for all these splendid stories. Sorry for asking you the same thing twice.

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    1. Wow, those are some HOT stories! And thanks for the comments on my rewrite of the Deadwood story (though, again, the original author needs the lion's share of the credit - I just embellished his story).

      I didn't have plans to vivisect Zach's huge balls, though in the draft text I've written, you'll see PLENTY of the insides of his balls! >;) I HAVE been working on another original story, however, where an evil dude captures a truly heroically hung stud and plays hard with his big balls, including fucking around with the insides of one of those huge nuts. He cuts a hole in the wall of one of those balls, and then inserts a finger deep into the surprisingly firm and dense - yet yielding - flesh. One finger is followed by two, and then the cruel guy inserts his cock into that hole and FUCKS the poor stud's mammoth nut!

      How's THAT for twisted!

      That story series is just in its early stages, but it's one that I think will be exciting to finish.

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    2. I have no words to express my gratitude. I’m eagerly looking forward to reading those stories :D

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