Nothing encourages me to write and post these stories more than knowing that at least someone out there is appreciating them.
This next chapter has long been one of my favorites in this series, and was probably my biggest inspiration for wanting to put my twist on this story. It doesn't hurt that I have a distinct image of Rafael in my mind, and he's absolutely smokin' hot. Shame what happens to him in this week's chapter, though... ;)
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Haunted Mansion - Chapter 5
Based on an original anthropomorphic story by Wyndfeld
A handsome Latino soccer star runs afoul of Corbin’s ghost while taking a bath.
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Rafael shook his flashlight as the beam once again flickered. Shit, this was ridiculous! He’d just put new batteries into the flashlight earlier that day! How could they possibly be failing already?!The hunky Latino stud paused to adjust his massive loins in his baggy sweat pants before struggling some more with the flickering light. He’d taken this class as a laugh, thinking it would be an easy A, but he’d not counted on that dick White’s stupid field trips.
“God, I’m sick of haunted houses!” the dark-haired stud rumbled, his soft accent only making his deep voice even sexier. He’d not seen, heard, or felt a single thing on any of the field trips he’d taken as part of this class. In fact, the studly soccer player thought the whole thing was a complete load of shit.
“Paranormal my hot, muscular ass! I’ve got your paranormal right here!” he joked, grabbing at his fat bulge as he felt his way down the dark hallway.
“Fuck it!” Rafael finally said, and turned on a light switch in the hallway. To his surprise, several sconce lights on either side of the hall immediately switched on, revealing nothing out of the ordinary other than a very dusty hall. The young man smirked, his full lips pursing into that heart melting, dimpled smile that he knew worked so well on both men and women alike. He switched off his failing flashlight and started poking his head into the rooms on either side of the hallway.
Each room was unremarkable - a couple of bedrooms, a sewing room, and a room filled with a girl’s dolls and toys, all of them thick with the dust of decades - creepy perhaps, but not unusual.
Rafael then came to a large bathroom and stopped up short. While all of the other rooms had clearly been abandoned for 60 years, this bathroom looked clean and pristine, almost as if a maid had come through earlier that day. The walls and all the fixtures were in gleaning white tile and porcelain, and there were white fluffy towels on the racks. Rafael stepped into the room and sniffed one of the towels, and was surprised to find that the towels smelled fresh, as if they had been dried outside in the summer sun. The young man grinned, and decided that Professor White or one of his teaching assistants had come through the mansion earlier and provided fresh linens. How thoughtful!
The muscular young stud then noticed the extra large claw-foot bathtub against the far wall of the large room. “Hmmm,” the young and eternally randy stud thought to himself, “that tub sure looks inviting. And I haven’t cum all day. Perhaps I can just take some time to have a hot bath and pull out a big load…”
Smirking again at his idea, Rafael grabbed the bottom of his tight t-shirt in both hands, and peeled it up and over his head in one clean motion. The young man revealed a spectacular physique beneath, and a lean but impressive musculature that would make any man jealous. Rafael had powerfully developed muscles, far bigger than one would expect on a soccer player, but he wasn’t overdeveloped or bulky. His waist was almost ridiculously slender, a truly ‘waspish’ waist with a belly of etched, corrugated muscles. His amazingly slender waist only served to accentuate his large and exquisitely defined pecs and wide shoulders. Rafael’s chest was particularly stunning, two twin globes of perfectly proportioned muscle topped by two small but very succulent nipples. Not a single hair marred the caramel perfection of the young man’s chest and abs, and the thick hatch of dark hair in his armpits only served to amplify his masculinity.
Rafael was without a doubt one of the hottest young men at the university.
The young hunk then shucked his sweat pants down and easily stepped out of them. As usual, Rafael wasn’t wearing any underwear - his crotch felt too constricted even by boxer shorts - and so his lower body was now revealed in all of its glory. Rafael’s gorgeous legs were thick with powerful muscle, more like a rugby player’s legs than those of a soccer player, and were deeply cut and defined. Unlike his virtually hairless upper body, Rafael’s massive legs were covered in a thick dusting of dark hair. His incredibly shapely legs met at one of the most spectacular, muscular bubble butts in the university, two meaty globes as breathtaking as the young man’s face and chest, and with a thick trail of dark hair leading up from his legs to disappear in the crack of his monumental ass.
But when he came upright, Rafael finally revealed what really made him famous - and notorious - all over the campus. His thick, uncut cock hung down a full 8 inches when completely limp, nearly as wide as his wrist and covered in a thick tracery of veins. The young stud was known as the ‘Latin Lover’ on campus, for the hot young co-eds could not seem to resist the sexy stud’s combined charm, beauty, and swaying man meat. Hanging beneath that thick cock were a pair of huge nuts that were bigger than Grade AAA hen’s eggs, fat huevos that powered the young man’s awesome masculinity. Rafael's balls hung very low and loose in their baggy, hairy scrotum, naturally hanging down an astounding 5 or 6 inches from his crotch, the bottom of his big nuts hanging even lower than his thick, flaccid cock. Rafael loved the feel of his big, low-hanging balls bouncing against his partner when he fucked, whether it was the pussy of some hot chick or the ass of some handsome college boy.
Rafael turned on the shower head, and at first all he heard was the banging of the pipes in the old walls. Then after a few seconds, a deluge of white water began to pour from the shower head, scouring the long unused pipes of decades of dust. After about a minute, the white water turned clear, and steam began to rise from the tub as the water went from chillingly cold to pleasantly hot. The iron drain in the center of the porcelain tub made a peculiar noise, almost like a belch, as the water washed down into it. Another gurgling sound came up as the drain swallowed the water. Rafael was not quite sure what could make that sound, but he eventually just shrugged his muscular shoulders and stepped into the tub.
The young man entered the porcelain tub and let the hot water cascade over his gorgeous form. The steaming water poured its heat into Rafael’s muscles, soothing him and slowly transporting him into a state of deep relaxation. The young man’s mind began to wander, and he started fantasizing about the other young men who were on this field trip with him, all of whom were handsome and strapping young men that he would love to fuck. He fantasized about the hot and cocksure hockey player named Ryan, and the stunningly handsome swimmer Darin with his famous Speedo-encased pouch of massive man meat. He thought about the tight-bodied gymnast, Josh, and the two hulking muscle men, the blond and Nordic-looking Tor, and the dark haired, Polish-looking guy, Moose, both of whom had massive bulges in their jeans to match their enormous muscles.
But over and above all of them, Rafael fantasized about Logan, the quarterback of the university’s undefeated football team. Logan looked every inch like a comic book superhero, from his chiseled and achingly handsome all-American features; to his massively muscular body that eclipsed even those the other two big boys, Tor and Dave, in both size and aesthetic perfection; to his utterly charming and friendly personality. Just a little over a week ago, Rafael had been fortunate enough to be showering in the virtually deserted locker room at the same time as the ultra hunk Logan, and had finally seen the super stud in the nude. Logan’s physique was unreal, bulging with massive muscles that were thrumming with power and might, and yet perfectly proportioned, deeply defined, and utterly beautiful in a completely masculine way. It was hard to believe that the handsome stud was barely 18, as a seasoned bodybuilder twice his age would have been jealous of the young man’s awesome mass and muscle maturity.
Then Logan turned around, and Rafael caught his first glimpse of the young football star’s massive equipment. The Latin stud actually gasped in surprise, for even Rafael’s horse-hung member and fat balls were utterly dwarfed in size by Logan’s awesome endowment. Logan’s cock had to be close to a full foot long - completely limp! The huge member hung down almost like a third leg, thick as a beer can but at least twice as long. Like Rafael, the massive head of Logan’s pale bull cock was covered in a thick, beautiful fold of foreskin. The Latino had never before seen a cock like it, for it looked like it belonged on some sort of massive beast and not a man, now matter how big and muscular he might be.
And hanging from beneath that truly heroic cock were a set of balls so huge that they made Rafael’s big goose eggs look like grapes in comparison. Rafael had never seen balls so huge even on the stud bull’s back home on his family’s cattle ranch. Each massive orb was easily the size of the largest of grapefruit, impossibly fat and meaty and juicy, and hung loose and heavy in a sac that was so large it could have accommodated a bowling ball. The twin testicles looked immensely heavy, and they hung down almost as far as Rafael's own colossally low hangers. In Logan’s case, the 4- or 5-inch-long neck of his elongated scrotum looked ridiculously narrow when compared to the massive bulk of stud nuts contained at the bottom of that huge sac.
Rafael had been stunned into immobility at the sight of this muscle god with his super human endowment. The Latino’s young cock went from soft to painfully rock hard in only about four heartbeats, and he thought he would cum then and there. Suddenly, Rafael could feel the man’s eyes on him, and he glanced up and made eye contact with Logan’s stunning blue orbs. The young superman gave a disarmingly shy and tentative smile, and Rafael could see his thick schlong twitch and start to thicken.
The sight was too much for the usually uber confident Rafael, who fled the showers with his achingly hard boner bouncing before him. He threw on his clothes without drying himself first, and had to stuff his boner into his wet pants. His hardon refused to go down, and he had to race back to his apartment and jack off 6 times before his cock would finally go limp. As it was, he jacked off another 6 or 7 times that day, thinking about Logan’s titanic man meat and gorgeous smile, and had dreamed about the stud almost every day since. Having the uber stud along on this field trip was blissful torture for the Latin hunk, and he hoped he’d get a chance to finally say hi to the handsome quarterback.
All of these thoughts quickly had Rafael sporting his famous, 11 1/2 inch monster boner. He reached one hand down and began to idly play with his thick cock, stroking it gently and massaging the pliant head and rock hard shaft with his fist. His other hand reached down to cup his huge heavy nuts and roll them around in his hand. Yeah, it was definitely time to clean his pipes and pull out a massive load.
Rafael knelt down in the unusually large and wide tub, sitting back on his heels and continuing to stroke his cock. He faced the shower head, and let the hot, pounding water bathe his magnificent chest, his rippling belly, and his thrusting groin. His other hand continued to roll his heavy nuts around, and he could almost feel the male juices sloshing around inside them, for they felt thick and heavy with need. He grinned and encircled the big balls with his fingers, and then began stretching them out even further from his body. A powerful bolt of lust pulsed through his throbbing groin.
It all felt so good that Rafael soon closed his beautiful brown eyes with their dark, thick lashes, and let his imagination take hold, fantasizing about sex with Logan and all of the other hot men in the group. He didn’t pay any attention to the gurgling sound still coming up from the drain, and so he didn’t notice at the sound had changed and was growing louder. And with his eyes closed, he didn’t see the shiny black tentacle begin to rise from the drain like some hungry, evil cobra, snaking back and forth as it slid over the smooth wet floor of the tub toward the young man’s thickly muscled and wide spread thighs.
Rafael lifted up his big twin balls, softly squeezing them one at a time. “Yeah,” he grunted under his breath, dropping them to the tub’s solid bottom where they struck with a dull and meaty thud, his naturally elongated scrotum allowing more than enough slack for his big nuts to collide with the porcelain floor. He loved the feeling of his big balls thudding against the tub and splashing into the water streaming down his tight and muscular body. So he did it again, and again, and again, lifting up his huge balls and letting them drop heavily to the tub floor.
SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK! SMACK!
Each beefy slap of balls on porcelain seemed to call to the black, almost translucent tendril, and it slowly drew ever closer to the young man’s kneeling form. Finally, it spread itself into a wide, spatula-like shape, and placed itself just underneath of the young stud’s mighty nuts.
‘THU--SPLISH!!’
Rafael huffed, feeling his balls land not against the hard porcelain of the tub, but instead into something soft and jelly like. “Hmm, is that soap?" he wondered, slowly rubbing those huge balls down into the thick muck, not quite understanding what it was, but then really not caring at this point.
The tentacle for its part began to squeeze back, sticking to the young man’s big floppy scrotum and slowly expanding and sliding around to engulf those massive, hairy nuggies. Rafael’s fingers moved back up to continue to slowly jack his long, thick dick, stroking it as the peculiar sensation of the expanding tentacle slid over his tingling balls.
When it finally had them fully captured, the tentacle began to squeeze slowly and gently, massaging the huge balls and gently crushing them against one another.
“Ummmmm!” Rafael gasped in pleasure and stopped stroking. He opened his eyes, but the water poured hot and steamy into them. He reached down and fondled over his big nuts. They felt funny, strange, thicker, almost numb as if they had been anesthetized.
“Must be the hot water…” the Latin stud thought, though something still troubled the back of his mind. But then his thoughts returned once more to Logan, and he moaned softly to himself. His fist began to stroke his huge cock again, the other rubbing over his magnificent chest. He tweaked his erect nipples and rubbed the thick muscle of his hard pecs as he thought of the handsome, massive, and colossally hung football star lying naked in bed. Rafael’s dick pulsed thickly and urgently between his fingers as he thought of Logan’s huge cock and gargantuan balls. How large would Logan's cock get when it was fully hard? Rafael wondered. What was the size of the load waiting in those massive testicles? Rafael’s own nuts pulsed at the thought, eager to unleash their own mighty load. His arousal intensified, and as it did, his massive organ grew even harder.
The tentacle slowly began to pull at his Rafael’s huge balls, gripping more tightly around his fat nuts, squeezing them together and stretching them out. The sensation felt exquisite, and Rafael unconsciously scooted forward on his knees when the pressure on his balls became a bit too tight, the tension on his big balls pulling him forward toward the drain itself. But he didn’t care, lost as he was in a haze of his own inflamed lust.
Soon Rafael was kneeling directly over the drain, continuing to frig his cock and blissfully unaware of the tendril wrapped completely around his powerful balls. The tentacle continued to pull on his straining nuts, pulling the huge balls ever downward and stretching them out more and more. They were already stretched well beyond 6 inches, and were now a mere inch above the drain itself.
The strain on his bull nuts only made the randy soccer player more aroused, and he yanked on his rock hard cock fast and hard, feeling the beginnings of an earth shattering orgasm starting to build inside him.
Unseen by the young soccer star, a second tendril snaked out of the drain, followed by a third and then a fourth. The first two gently wrapped themselves around Rafael's scrotum, just above his trapped balls, adding their strength to the insistent tugging on the young man’s hairy nuts. The last tendril, however, split off from the rest and reached up between the young man's glorious ass cheeks, seeking the virgin pucker between them.
Finding its target, the wet and slimy tentacle suddenly thrust its way up Rafael’s shit chute, spearing past his tight sphincter to plunge deep into his hot depths. The young man gasped in shock and utter surprise, his beautiful eyes immediately flashing open, as the cold tentacle thrust its way into his achingly hot interior. “What the FUCK!?!” he grunted as he tried to back away from the violating tendril, but very quickly discovered that his bull balls were firmly locked in place. Any attempt to pull away would result in the young man tearing his own goose eggs off.
The violator in his virgin ass began to swell larger and larger, a huge and boneless mass filling him up. “AAAAAHH!!!” he squealed in surprise and fear, reaching down to grab at the wiggling thing in his ass and try to yank it out. But then the thing twisted, punching against his prostate, and the young man gasped in overwhelming pleasure, his eyes all but bugging out of his head.
“OOOOHH!!!” Rafael moaned, flopping back on his heels. His whole body spasmed as it tried to orgasm, but he somehow couldn’t. His fingers fell limp from his powerfully throbbing and pulsing cock as if he was paralyzed by the cold invader in his ass. The young man was helpless, and could only watch as yet another black tendril issued forth from the drain and wrapped around his thick organ like the stripe on a barber pole. It snaked, squeezed, and stroked the massive member, engulfing it as it pulsed up and down the enormous shaft.
Rafael moaned softly, watching wide eyed as his dick got masturbated by the alien tendril. It was terrifying… but at the same time, it was incredibly erotic and pleasurable. The tendril was slimy and cold, but wonderfully tight around his huge cock. The young man hunched up, groaning as the tentacle pulled and pushed at his cock, while his ass was simultaneously being stretched and filled by the massive tentacle that had pouring into him from behind. He was now stretched so wide that he wondered if his ass would never be the same. Sordid slurping sounds could be heard coming out of his completely fucked ass. Rafael's prostate was being prodded and pounded, beaten and battered, the massive tentacle grinding powerfully against the swollen organ.
Yet still he could not cum.
The young man began to feel the tendrils pulling even harder at his aching nuts, drawing the already overstretched orbs closer and closer to the large metal drain. Paralyzed still by the icy chill that even the hot water couldn’t wash away, Rafael could not resist it, even as the straining on his nuts became almost too much for the poor young stud to bear. His strong and muscular body twitched and jerked involuntarily, as his balls were stretched to the point where they were flush against the drain itself, easily a full 8 inches from his straining crotch.
“This can’t be happening!!!” Rafael bellowed, terror making his heart thunder in his powerful chest.
And yet the tendrils did not stop their brutal pulling, and continued to yank and stretch the fat bull nuts. Had Tor been in this position, there was no way his massive bull balls could have been forced down that drain, and the idea of fitting mighty Logan’s colossal nuts down the drain would have been beyond laughable. But even Rafael’s hefty, oversized hen’s egg were each far larger than the drain opening, yet the tendrils refused to let a small detail like that stop them. The building pressure caused Rafael’s huge balls to bulge and distort against the drain opening, distending monstrously against the relentless pulling. Rafael felt like his balls were going to explode, and his bellows of agony took on an even more urgent sound.
Finally, with a wet plopping sound, Rafael’s left nut was forced into the drain, squashed down to half its normal size and forming a cylindrical plug in the drain pipe. The young man’s ballooning right nut soon followed, and both mighty orbs were now fully wedged in the drain. Tears were streaming down Rafael’s stunningly handsome face, for his screaming nuts were now pulled to almost 10 inches from his body, almost twice their already astounding natural dangle. He didn’t know how much more his poor balls could take before they were ripped off of his body.
However, the combination of the relentless pounding and grinding of his prostate, the masturbation of his entire pole, and the brutal stretching and grinding of his beefy nuts was causing the semen to bubble and broil deep in his thick ball meat. To the young man’s utter surprise, the mixture of pleasure and agony had him quickly rocketing toward his long denied orgasm.
A low rumble started deep in the young man’s muscular chest, and began to quickly build as his seed climbed toward release. The rumble turned into a growl, and then a roar, as the first massive slug of cum erupted from the young stud’s quivering, tentacle-wrapped cock.
The first wad of cum launched with astonishing force and power, blasting from the hunky Latino’s massive cock and striking high up on the tile wall, just a few inches below the shower head itself. A second powerful wad followed, and a third, and a fourth, and a fifth, as the monumental orgasm washed over Rafael’s sexy, muscular body. The young man was shuddering in ultimate ecstasy, even as his balls were being pulled closer and closer to being ripped from his body. They were now at nearly 11 inches from his crotch, and the tendrils still refused to let up on their tug of war.
Blast after blast of cum burst forth from Rafael’s pulsing cock, whitewashing the tile wall and dripping in long ropes of thick cum down the face of the shower. Each blast struck a little lower on the wall, but all were extraordinarily powerful and contained a thick wad of Rafael’s powerful young stud spunk.
After nearly a score of powerful blasts, Rafael’s orgasm began to ebb, until only a steady drool of thick and chunky cum poured forth from his stiff, aching, and throbbing meat. His tortured bull balls had long since disappeared down into the depths of the dark drain, and only the ridiculously thin neck of his supremely overstretched scrotum proved that the mighty orbs were still attached to his body.
Rafael’s lustrous brown eyes flew open wide once again, and he began to shriek in even greater agony. The tentacle up his ass began to pound on his prostate with devastating power, forcing a few more thick but watery streams of cum to pour from Rafael's ravaged cock into the tub. Soon, however, nothing more would come from the young man’s swollen cock despite the continuing hammering of his swollen prostate.
When the young man’s well of virility had run utterly dry, the tentacle finally shrank and exited his raped and violated ass. Rafael almost sighed with relief as the fullness in his ravaged bowels was finally removed. But then he stared in renewed horror as the tentacle wrapped around the very base of his rock solid cock and began to constrict. The tentacle was fantastically strong, and despite the thickness of Rafael’s mighty man meat, the wicked black tentacle was rapidly crushing the tissues at the base of the massive joint. Rafael’s cock swelled larger still in response, larger than the cock had ever grown before, bloating with the blood that was being trapped inside its massive girth.
At the same time, Rafael could feel his nuts being pulled harder still. They had already exceeded a full foot of stretch, and refused to budge any farther without ripping. The young man knew that the end was near. His whole muscular body clenched as he fought to somehow stay intact.
Suddenly, with a loud and wet tearing sound, Rafael felt and saw his massive sex organs simultaneously pull free from his body, his now colossal cock rending at the base with a fountain of blood while his scrotum snapped and allowed his big bull balls to disappear down the drain, their familiar, comfortable weight gone forever.
The sudden loss of resistance caused Rafael to flop onto his back at the far end of the tub, his gorgeous brown eyes wide in shock and horror at his brutal and sudden emasculation. Blood continued to pour from his denuded crotch as he watched the tentacles begin to retract down the drain. The last two tentacles were still wrapped tight around his bloated man meat, and were now trying to force the huge cock base first into the drain. The massive cock was even thicker than his huge balls, and it seemed an impossible and ridiculous notion to fit such a huge slab of beef down the drain. But with a sudden powerful jerk and a wet, crunching, slurping sound, the entire length of his huge penis disappeared down the hole. All evidence that Rafael had ever been a man was now gone.
The pain and shock of his emasculation, combined with his continuing blood loss, forced Rafael to pass out, his mind traveling into blessed oblivion. As his consciousness fled, a disembodied voice coldly chuckled in evil glee…
Oh, naughty tentacles. Is there a schoolgirl or boy you aren't after?
ReplyDeleteGreat job on describing Rafael as well as building up superstud Logan. I'm still enjoying your ability to walk the line between sexy and horrifying. Your additions to the original add more personality to the victims and more tension (and hotness) to the attacks.
Now we wait to see where Lance's lance will end up. Laboratory? Bedroom? Surgery? So many rooms left as we draw towards the halfway point.
Thanks once again for the comments, tachyon! I'm glad that you enjoyed Rafael's chapter, and build up to Logan. The last three chapters are all about the super stud quarterback, and I'm clearly saving the best for last. ;)
DeleteDude I absolutely love this series. Great great job! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteI'm SO glad that you're loving it! And I'm so gratified to be getting so many comments on this series! Hearing from you guys really helps encourage me to keep writing and keep posting, so THANK YOU!
DeleteI've always wanted to create a nice long series. I started working on one in which an alien comes to earth and delights in tormenting testosterone producing JOCKS with it's reality bending and shape manipulating ways --and of course, the more VIRILE and MASCULINE the massively hung musclejocks are, the better they are to torment/ballbust/emasculate. I never got around to completing it though, BUT you're putting some fire in my belly! Good job on keeping your momentum up and for dabbling in the darker side of things. Your writing is pretty great. Sometimes Brutal is HOT!!! PS I know you've got a handle on things but if you'd ever like to bounce ideas off each other or need help editing or just wanting to have fun working on a story together, let me know! I'd love to flex my pervy writing muscles again... XOXO
DeleteWow, LOVE the idea for your epic series! SO many possibilities!! I really hope my recent posts inspire you to work on it! And I'd love to assist in any way I can. Let me know how to contact you, and we can correspond one-on-one about story ideas.
DeleteWriting is obviously my creative outlet for my darker fantasies, and if it turns other readers on too, then that's a huge bonus for me. Definitely going a bit darker in this series with the destruction and emasculation of so many uber potent jocks, but kinda had to given the source material. I have plenty more stories ready to post that are still brutal, but at least the stud survives them intact. :)
Oh, and if you think that THIS series is long, wait until I post my truly epic saga. The draft is fully completed, and it's 41 (!!!!) chapters long!! I won't say much about it yet, but I'll give you the working title -- Captive of the Cyborgs. :)