Venom of Medusa - Original Version

Here is the original story that inspired my version of Venom of Medusa. As you can see, my version is WILDLY different from the original -- pretty much the only concept I kept was that a guy gets bitten by Medusa and ejaculates her snake babies. But I thought you all might want to see the original anyway.

Venom of Medusa

Medusa must reproduce to ensure a future of pure sadism

Venom of Medusa

They had come to this old place because Jane thought it would be sexy for their first time. Both Mark and Jane were virgins, and though Mark wasn't too picky, Jane wanted something to put her in the mood, and one thing that worked was scary old houses. But this was no ordinary house.

The people of this town spoke of a woman who haunted this house, a lust-bent hellspawn named Medusa, who seduced young men in order to impregnate herself and give birth to a demon child, who would walk the earth causing mass suffering and chaos. Of course they didn't believe such a tale, but it was sexy.

They climbed up to the old bedroom, chasing each other and giggling all the way. Once inside, they kissed vigorously on the bed, pawing each other all over. She began to undress and Mark thought he would explode from excitement.

Her small breasts bounced out of her bra and he ripped his shirt and pants off in no time. Jane was evidently starting to get nervous though, this was her first time after all. When he pulled out his penis, she gasped. "What's wrong with it?" she said in a shakey voice.

"What do you mean?" asked Mark, quite startled by her question, he thought she would be impressed with his raging 8 inches.

"Where is the.. why is there all that skin over it?" She had three brothers and had seen many a penis, but never an uncircumsized one.

"Oh, I just haven't been circumsized," he retorted, pulling back the skin to reveal his large cockhead.

"I-I'm sorry, I just can't do this now," she said shakily, gathering up her clothes and running out.

"Jane, wait!!" he cried, but it was too late. He felt terrible, not just because he didn't get his chance to get laid, but he just felt bad about the situation, as if he had done something wrong to Jane, though he knew he hadn't. He sat down on the bed and sighed to himself.

Just then his eye caught a figure in the corner. His heart jumped and he pulled up a dusty sheet to cover himself.

"I think it's beautiful," the shape said, and as it emerged from the shadows, it revealed itself as one of the most gorgeous (and NUDE) women he had ever seen. She looked to be about 30, 14 years older than him, but she had smooth pale white skin, round hips, a slightly rounded belly, perky breasts, long black braided hair with a tuft of curly black hair between her legs, and a heart-stopping face, with full lips and golden-green eyes. "I'd be glad to put my lips on that lovely pee-pee of yours," she said playfully but sensuously.

He instantly forgot the old story and was swept away. "Come on, don't be afraid to show it off boy, I've seen those things before you know." She came over and sat beside him, rubbing his back gently. He still held the covers over his genitals instinctively, but he wanted this woman more than he had ever wanted anything before. "You're a young one, aren't you?" she said, "Come on, let's see it," as she pulled the covers a bit and the large cock poked out. She grabbed it and he whimpered slightly as her forefinger and thumb gently peeled his foreskin down and his glans penis, already wet with excitement, popped out. "Have you ever had a blowjob, sweetie??" He shook his head no. As he sat on the bed, she got down on her knees and lowered her head slowly, extending her tongue to lather the swollen ridges of his cockhead.

Mark lay on his back and began to moan at this glorious attention. Her hand pumped his member up and down as she sucked, licked and playfully nipped at his glans and foreskin, his whole body shivered with excitement. She continued at it and he knew it wouldn't take him long at all. As she went, she got a little rougher with him, her nips turned into little bites, but this made him more and more excited. He didn't see that the black braids around her head had taken on life, writhing and taking the form of black vipers. He began to cry more excitedly as his hips began to push forward into the air. She withdrew her lips from his penis but continued to stroke the large cock, every upstroke burying his cockhead in folds of sensitive skin, every downstroke unwrapping the leaking plumb, and as she parted her full lips, the black head of a viper slowly emerged.

Mark began to make high-pitched squeaking noises as his body shivered and quaked. He bit down on the sheets as his toes curled and he let out the most massive squirt of semen possible, letting it fly clear over his head. His whole body recoiled as the second stream washed over his chest and the blankets. At this point the silent viper/tongue flicked it's own tongue out to catch a taste of the forcefully ejected stream, then, opening its mouth, just on a rough upstroke, it buried its fangs through his foreskin and deep into his large cockhead.

His cry of pleasure turned into a cry of horrifying pain as it released a venom that seemed to paralyze him, not entirely but enough that he could not move very well. He managed a couple of small squirts of semen, but his orgasm was rather short-lived. He writhed in pain, as she said nothing and just watched. His whole penis felt as though it was on fire, and it began to painfully swell, until the whole member was almost three times as thick as it was naturally. Tears rushed down his face, he could barely make a noise at this point. Then he felt something else.

There was a strange wriggling feeling from inside his penis. His urethra felt blocked up, almost like something was fucking him from inside. There was an intense wave of itchiness inside him, something that at first was unbearable, but then almost pleasurable. His prostate kicked in and then his hips began to buck completely involutarily. He suddenly felt that his body was trying desperately to ejactulate to relieve the blockage and the wiggling itch or tickle from inside. His whole lower torso pushed as if he were constipated, and he was sure he would lose his bowels. Though he couldn't move very well, he could bring his head up enough to see that his inhumanly swollen member was oozing a mix of cum and blood, his testicles were drawn tightly in and his penis was actually ejaculating, but in a way as if to release something more. He moaned, it was so good and so painful all at once. A squirt of blood shot out and hit him in the cheek, and then his piss-slit stretched open as the tiny head of a baby snake poked out. His body struggled to force it out, his hips continued to thrust to the best of their ability, and finally it did slither out, only to be followed by two more heads struggling to get out at the same time. Now pain had taken over as his penis swelled even more and a pool of blood and ejaculate continued to deposit itself on his belly. He rolled his head back and forth is pain, teeth clenched, as more of these creatured filled his urethra.

One had carved a new path and he watched through tears as one of the bite marked on his cockhead opened up and a snake forced its way out. He let out the best scream he could manage as his piss-slit finally stretched too far and his cockhead split in half, hordes of tiny snakes pouring out of his destroyed shaft. Mercifully, he managed to pass out, as the snakes made their way off of his belly, off of the side of the bed, and slithered into the waiting vagina of Medusa.

When she had sucked the last one into her womb, she smiled and said to herself, "finally it is ready. My child shall come and all will suffer even worse than you did my dear boy." With that she stood up and returned to the shadows from where she came.