As I've mentioned for the past couple of weeks now, I always intended this series to have at least a few more chapters, but I have never gotten around to writing them. That's where YOU come in! Below I have provided some brief and incomplete ideas for how this saga might continue. But I want to hear from you guys. What should happen to Jason next? What new and brutal tortures can be inflicted on his massive nuts? Will more of Jason's police gear be used against him, like his taser, pepper spray, or even his gun? And will he survive intact?
Remember, I'm still in school until November, so will have little to no time to write any next text for a while. I'm therefore relying on all of YOU to provide me with as many story ideas and text as possible. Okay? Now ready, set, GO!!! :)
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An Officer and Three Gentlemen
Parts 3 and 4 (unfinished)
Based on an original story written by Sack Stomper in 2000
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A hot Detroit muscle cop has his massive balls busted wide open by 3 luscious hunks
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Part 3
Taser Jason in the balls. Shrieks of agony as his balls are cooked from the inside out. Muscles bulging in phenomenal definition. Hits his fifth orgasm, which pours from his paralyzed cock in a lush and unending river. Chunky baby batter pours over his bull balls, completing a circuit that runs back down the length of his cock tube into the heart of his plumbing, amplifying the effects of the taser and causing his balls to spasmodically quiver and shudder with frightening violence, looking like they are about to spectacularly explode.
Part 4
The three captors decide it’s time to end their fun with the hot rookie muscle cop. They strip out of the rest of their clothes, revealing muscular bodies and spectacular endowments. None of them are as large as the colossal set of cock and balls possessed by Jason, but they nevertheless put almost every porn star in history to shame. They wrap a noose of steel wire around Jason’s behemoth cock and balls. Drew and Eric stand on either side of their huge muscular captive, holding either end of the thin steel cable. Sebastian then kneels before Jason and expertly takes the entire length of his colossal flesh cannon down his throat, milking it with his powerful neck muscles as he gently fondles and manhandles the young man’s swollen and beet-red nuts. No one has ever managed to accommodate Jason’s monumental cock before, and Jason’s mind gets lost in the exquisite pleasure of his very first blow job.
When Jason is about to reach orgasm, Sebastian yanks out the cock buried almost all the way down to his gullet and shouts “NOW!!!” to his cohorts. The first massive gout of cum escapes from Jason’s unsheathed cock before Eric and Drew yank back on the cable with all their might, closing off the loop of steel and choking off Jason’s thundering cock. A new agony slams Jason in his loins, the sharp biting pain of the steel wire digging into his flesh combined with the deep throbbing ache of a sixth massive orgasm painfully backing up in his plumbing. The three men fully expect the wire to cut through Jason’s flesh like butter, but the young man proves to once again be tougher than expected, and the thick, muscular flesh of Jason’s genitals puts up unexpected resistance. Eric and Drew pull and strain with all of their might, their huge arms bulging massively with the effort. Jason’s cock swells even larger, bloating as its blood supply is choked off, and turning a dark and angry red. His huge cock head swells up to nearly the size of a fist, turning a frightening dark purple as it strains to release the colossal load backing up in his strangled balls.
Sebastian rushes to Eric’s side, grips the trailing end of the cable, and adds his strength to the brutal tug of war that has Jason’s huge genitals trapped at its center. A trickle of blood appears at the base of Jason’s crotch, signaling that the thin steel wire is finally beginning to penetrate into the thick scrotum and tough meatus of Jason’s colossal cock. In a few moments, the wire will surely tear through Jason’s flesh, which will be followed by the sickening 'PLOP!' as his severed dick and huge balls hit the bare wood floor. Jason knows his time as a virile and powerful alpha stud are about to come to a painful and permanent end.
Does Jason get rescued by the timely arrival of the FBI, or do the three thugs succeed in destroying this paragon of muscular manliness?
Hmm...Okay, some ideas:
ReplyDeletePart 3:
-I like everything in this. I'd have them start with one long burst to start inflicting some real damage, then repeatedly zap his balls in short bursts to make things repeatedly seize up and spasm and force an orgasm out of him.
-Halfway into his mighty orgasm, switch back to one long burst to make his nuts seize up, unable to relax n' convulse to purge their load. This would effectively ruin his orgasm and locking away the rest of that monstrous load in his aching, over-stuffed balls for the big finisher...
Part 4:
- I'd perhaps do two separate nooses of steel wire, one for his cock, one for his balls - you have the spare manpower to pull it off, it lets them pull in two different directions and makes strangling his mighty endowments all the better to visualize.
-Perhaps make use of a police baton? You could ram it down his urethra as soon as he begins to cum, or just use it as a blunt instrument to add further insult n' injury as his mighty maleness is being choked off...
-For the big finisher, I'd rather the wire -doesn't- do what it's expected to. Instead, I'd have the internal strain on those monstrous balls prove to be too much for the huge organs - the huge things are just too full, too strained from having two consecutive orgasms cut short, too weakened from the abuse! They should suddenly, violently and fatally explode, their grotesque potency their own undoing!
-Now, for his cock, there needs to be some sort of coup de grace...You -could- let it survive, safe in the knowledge that it'll become so much limp, useless meat without those impossible testicles there to power it. Or, you could let that steel wire do its work. Perhaps help it along by shattering his erection with a baton, or even executing the huge thing with his own firearm. At any rate, cock destruction has never really been my personal focus - I think it should be done, but I'm not positive how.
And yes, I think the three thugs should succeed. Perhaps they get their comeuppance down the line, perhaps not...But this overhung stud's been allowed to go on for too long without having things come to an (appropriately destructive) end!
First of all, where have you been all of my life?! LOL! I seriously loved all of your comments, and got rock hard reading them. :)
DeleteYour ideas for part 3 are perfect, especially the idea of forcing Jason to abort his mammoth load, trapping all of that spunk in his huge balls and making them swell even larger with all of that painful congestion. Really focus on the agonizing pain of all of his plumbing backing up with his impossibly thick sperm, making all of his tubules and ducts swell to even more massive proportions.
And I wholeheartedly agree - part 4 needs to see the spectacular end of Jason's heroic manhood. And using the insane virility of his mighty balls to achieve that end is definitely the ticket!
The steel wires are looped around the base of his monster cock and around both of his ridiculously swollen bull nuts, choking them tight and preventing even a single drop of sperm from escaping. The thugs then use the cop's own billy club to brutally beat and bludgeon both his cock and his balls, really tearing into the stud's impossibly tough manhood with the intent of reducing it to rubble. All of this violent attention forces Jason to cum again, and again, and yet again, his massive loads choked off and trapped in his straining nuts, making them swell bigger and bigger with each failed orgasm. The walls of his titanic nuts being to visibly strain with the effort of containing so much meat and male juices as they swell to unheard of proportions.
The fifth failed orgasm proves to be too much for Jason's overproductive stud nuts, and the explode catastrophically in a shower of gore and broken nuts guts, splattering and coating all three thugs with gallons of overripe stud juice and the shattered and ruined remains of Jason's once-epic manhood.
I'm also less interested in the ultimate disposition of Jason's beautiful horse cock, but I agree that it needs to meet a tragic end as well. The choking wire keeps his rod rock hard, despite the horrific loss of his overburdened testicles, so it remains a pillar of raw maleness right to the very end. I think the thugs should continue to batter the huge fuck stick with the baton, perhaps breaking the mighty organ. But the coup de grace definitely needs to be Jason's own firearm. I'm tempted to have one of the boy's shove the barrel of the gun down deep into Jason's overstretch urethra, still leaking the dregs of his final viable sperm as a man. When they pull the trigger, the cock simply explodes in a huge chunky spray of man meat.
The thugs will toss the unconscious and bleeding muscle hunk out in the trash, leaving him for dead. But Jason is such a tough fucker, though, that I think he'll survive even the unimaginably brutal loss of his manhood. His recovery can then fuel the revenge that follows, as each of the three thugs meets his own spectacular and messy end.
How's that for a start?
It is unlikely that I will be able to write these subsequent chapters until after I graduate in November, but these stories will be near the TOP of my list of stories to write!
Thank you so much for your input, and please feel free to leave even more.
Ooo, sounds like a very good foundation to me! I also just noticed that there was mention of the thugs being armed with chrome pipes, but I don't think I ever saw them used? Maybe they could be used in addition to his baton...
DeletePerhaps something more heavy-duty than a sidearm should be used to finally fell that behemoth of a cock? They could always find a shotgun in the trunk of his cruiser...It'd be plenty sufficient to blow apart that oversized endowment, and by a cruel twist of irony the sheer size n' bulk of his ruined maleness was the only thing keeping that buckshot from doing him in!
And, of course, if you're ever interested in a quick back-n-forth story session / roleplay, you know where to find me ^^
Good catch -- I'll have to add the chrome pipes to the mix as well. :)
DeleteExcellent suggestion about the use of a shotgun to permanently destroy Jason's giant cock. Gonna be DAMN messy, though, so I'm glad I won't be the one in charge of cleaning things up! ;)
And I'd love to have a back-and-forth story session with you some time! Might even be the seed for another story or two! Hit me up on my personal email address. Can't guarantee I'll have a lot of free time between now and graduation in November, but one DOES need a study break now and again, right...?
Good ideas!I specially like grannnnnde explosion and Jason's reaction to losing his boys way like that! Thrilling to see what way its gonna be....
ReplyDeleteThanks whistle, and I'm really excited about these ideas, too! I really enjoy getting this sort of input from readers, as it turns ME on as well.
DeleteYeah, Jason is going to be utterly dumbfounded at the explosive loss of his big boys, his pride and joy, and I think he's going to be stunned into open-mouthed silence for a seeming eternity. Poor bastard is too damn tough to pass out, though, so he remains fully conscious for the subsequent beating, mauling, and destruction of his monster cock as well. Only THEN does the handsome stud slip into merciful unconsciousness... :)
Love to ideas here, hope you revisit it
ReplyDeleteWould love to come back to this some day! :)
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