Friday, June 5, 2020

College Carnival Carnage - Part 1

I'm excited to post my first rewrite of a Sack Stomper story in a long while. He's one of my all-time favorite erotic authors, and I wanted to once again pay him homage by expanding one of his stories and giving it the "Jayse" treatment. ;)


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College Carnival Carnage
Based on an Original Story by Sack Stomper


The supremely hunky and hulking varsity football player was securely bound to the heavy wooden backboard, his outrageously muscular limbs spread out wide and tied to the thick wooden posts with heavy nylon ropes. Though the nearly naked muscle bull was tied up and gagged, his handsome face was still smiling and the young hunk was in good spirits. It was a fundraiser, after all, and all of the money would be going to a good cause. 

It was the annual spring carnival at the prestigious all-boys university, and all of the various clubs and athletic teams on campus had put together their own game booths to raise funds for various local charities. And the football team had once again brought back their somewhat racey but wildly popular ‘Make the Football Jock Sing Soprano’ booth. 

The early afternoon sun shone brightly on the scattered booths, tents, and attractions at the carnival, and the big, burly, and securely bound football jock’s magnificent body was glistening with sweat from the pleasant heat, his lightly tanned skin gleaming in the warm sunlight. The young man was wearing nothing but a set of light blue underwear briefs, the tight-fitting fabric hugging every eye-popping bulge and luscious curve of his beyond-prodigious sexual endowment and leaving very, very little to the imagination. 

Travis may have only been twenty years old, but he had already led his varsity football team to its second consecutive undefeated season. And since the hulking sophomore was getting bigger and stronger all the time, it was clear that he was likely to lead his team to two more victorious seasons before he graduated from college. It was no wonder that the young man was such an incredible athlete, for just one look at his bare, muscular form was evidence enough of the phenomenal power packed in the young lad’s unbelievably massive body. 

The young football jock was the team’s star wide receiver, and he was already being touted as one of the greatest wide receivers in the history of college football. Travis possessed extraordinary speed and agility on the gridiron, his long and powerful legs able to out sprint anyone on the field and his huge, fantastically muscular arms able to snatch any pass out of the air. The handsome bull combined that speed and agility with truly extraordinary muscular power, and when he carried the ball and plowed down the field, he was as unstoppable as an armored tank. Men simply bounced off of his enormously muscular form as he thundered toward the end zone, and he was virtually impossible to tackle. 

The six-foot, four-inch tall Travis had exceedingly broad shoulders and a heavy-boned, long-limbed frame, which he’d managed to pack with an extraordinary amount of muscle, particularly in one still so very young. The handsome blond Hercules currently weighed a whopping 325 battle-hardened pounds of pure muscle. He had actually finished the football season a few months prior at an even more colossal 360 pounds, but then had cut down 35 pounds in order to compete in the regional collegiate-level bodybuilding competition a couple of weeks ago — which he’d won handedly for the third year in a row! Even after dropping nearly three dozen pounds, Travis was still absolutely staggeringly muscular, easily the biggest, thickest, and most densely built man on that competition stage. And with a bodyfat percentage now hovering between two and four percent, all of his magnificent muscles were exquisitely showcased in the most chiseled, deeply cut, and shredded way possible. 

Every part of Travis’ magnificent body was the pinnacle of muscular development, from his bullish, muscle-corded, 23.5-inch neck to his beefy and meaty size 16 feet, yet every gigantic muscle was so finely balanced and exquisitely proportioned that a body that SHOULD have looked bloated or grotesque was instead pure masculine aesthetic perfection. Nevertheless, some parts of Travis’ body stood out even more than others — his legendary, titanic upper arms, which measured just over 26 inches around; the wide plates of his colossal chest, enormous slabs of beef that measured more than six inches thick, lightly dusted with blond hair and capped with two succulent coral-pink nipples; the perfectly balanced and deeply etched cobblestones of his fantastic 8-pack of abdominal muscles, which were so extraordinarily well-developed that they were visible through all but the baggiest of clothing. In short, if you liked muscle, then Travis was your fantasy muscle god come to life. 

Travis was also blessed with an exceptionally handsome face, possessing the kind of intensely masculine beauty that turned heads everywhere he went. His German-Slavic ancestry was clearly evident in the square-jawed, heavy features of his stunningly handsome face. His strong chin and prominent jawline in particular were so pronounced that they would have looked comical on just about any other man, but were masculinity personified on Travis’ exquisite face. The wide planes of his cheekbones and forehead and his strong, prominent nose were softened by his full, kissable lips and stunning blue eyes accentuated with thick, dark blond lashes, adding a boyish charm and innocence to his otherwise overwhelmingly masculine face. Travis was simply heart-stoppingly beautiful, with the kind of chiseled handsomeness that was usually reserved only for matinee idols and comic book super heroes. 

The combination alone of such extraordinary good looks and a hulking, chiseled physique would have made the young muscle stud a god among men, a paragon of masculinity. But the gorgeous blond Adonis possessed yet another feature that made him stand out head and shoulders above the rest of the prime athletic studs on campus — the almost unrealistically enormous bulge testing the tensile strength of the pale blue fabric that was even now straining to contain the young man’s extraordinarily overdeveloped genitals. 

Travis’ football teammates had awarded the devastatingly handsome stud with the nickname ‘Bull’ not just for his great muscular size and his ability to rampage down the football field like some ferocious, charging beast, but also for the outrageously oversized meat swinging between his insanely muscular thighs. The young titan enjoyed parading around naked in the locker room, showing off his massive endowment to his awed teammates and enjoying the way his heavy, swinging meat would slap against his massive thighs with each step. Travis was understandably proud of his mighty, magnificent cock and low-hanging bull balls, and gladly endured the playful ribbing of his envious fellow footballers and friends as they gawked at his massive package.  

Protruding from the intersection of his tremendously thick, muscular legs was the snaking outline of a donkey-like penis, a colossal male organ that stretched all the way to his left hip and looked to be as thick as a beer can. The massive phallus must have measured over 10 inches in length even in its current, completely flaccid state, making it longer than the vast majority of full-sized boners in the world! But huge as his limp cock was, it was dwarfed by the size of the monstrous testicles forming an impossibly enormous bulge at the bottom of his overpacked briefs. Even on a physique as huge and heroically muscular as Travis’, his massive, larger-than-mango-sized bollocks looked outsized and out of place, and were quite literally as big as the testicles on the largest of stud bulls. Taken together, the young man’s resulting crotch bulge was positively pornographic and obscene, and had nearly resulted in the banning of the football team’s carnival booth after the uproar Travis’ participation had caused the previous year. But considering the enormous amount of money that Travis’ hour-long stint at the booth had earned the football team last year, and the young man’s extraordinary popularity with the university’s many football fans, the college’s administration had finally relented and allowed the team to bring the booth back this year. 

Such was the controversy surrounding Travis’ near-naked appearance at last year’s carnival event that the entire student body had been abuzz about the celebrated football player’s return appearance this year. Thus, the size of the crowd around the football booth began growing in the time leading up to the young man’s hour-long stint at the booth, and even the shifts of the rest of his teammates, each a paragon of young, athletic manhood in his own right, had seen a significant uptick in donations this year. 

By the time Travis showed up to relieve his teammate Patrick, himself a handsome, hung, and gorgeously muscled red head, an enormous crowd of admirers had gathered to see the huge football star. Wearing nothing but a white terry cloth robe and sandals, Travis arrived to much cheering and whistling, and the good-natured young man flashed a devastatingly handsome smile in response as he waved to the crowd and flexed his extraordinary biceps for the cameras. The cheers grew even louder and more raucous as the super stud stripped off the robe and revealed his monumentally muscular physique and enormous, cotton-clad, equine endowment. It took only a few minutes for his teammates to untie Patrick from the large wooden back board and replace him with the orders-of-magnitude more massive form of young Travis, and the games were allowed to resume. 

Unfortunately for Travis, being wildly popular, a nationally-renowned athlete, and the undisputed ‘Alpha Male Stud’ on campus earned the young man more than his fair share of detractors. Almost exclusively men, these haters were at their core extremely jealous of the fantastically gifted young man, envious of his amazing athletic prowess, his stunning good looks, his titanically muscular size, and his beyond-prodigious endowment. And as a bound and defenseless Travis was about to learn, such jealousy could breed a violent need to punish and destroy the object of one’s envy… 


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Derek the Ring Master, a fellow football player, was dressed in a tight, striped t-shirt, black short shorts, and large straw hat, showing off his own impressive physique to the passing carnival goers. He rang a bell and shouted to the crowd, “Step right up! Step right up! Have a chance to make this big jock sing soprano!” 

The huge crowd tittered, laughed, and cheered at the dark-haired Ring Master’s carnival barking, all eyes eagerly watching the rather nerdy young college lad taking his turn at the game. Several dozen young men had already had their shot at the handsome muscle bull, all with varying degrees of skill and success, but none had even come close to making the handsome hulk Travis sing soprano… and few would have bet on the latest competitor’s chance of success either. The scrawny young lad looked more than a bit awkward and shy as he stood at the line drawn in the sand a good 30 feet away from the bound muscle jock, and his slender arms seemed barely capable of a chin up, let alone the strength required to hurl one of the softball-sized orange rubber balls at the bulging, cloth-clad target. But judging from the not-inconsiderable size of the tube-shaped bulge snaking down one of the legs of the lad’s chinos, the nerdy young student was clearly very eager at his chance to throw a trio of balls at the uber jock’s massive, underwear-encased testicles. 

Travis noticed the young man’s arousal as well, and he flexed his mighty guns and massive legs for the nerdy lad’s benefit, teasing the slender student with his beyond-titanic musculature. He even wiggled his hips and thrust his pelvis forward as much as he restraints would allow, lasciviously taunting the lad with his mammoth package and making the nerdy guy blush. Travis was notorious for being an infamous ‘ladies’ man’ on campus, having slept with countless beautiful young women ever since reaching puberty at an early age. But truth be told, the handsome football jock was fully bisexual, and he had a special place in his heart for slender pretty boys like the one now taking aim at his crotch, and he secretly would have loved the opportunity to get naked with the nervous young lad and make gentle, passionate love with him. Maybe he would seek out the nerdy young pretty boy after the carnival ended today… 

The Ring Master handed the nerdy lad the three orange balls and stepped aside. The scrawny kid cocked back his arm, carefully aimed, and sent the first large rubber ball flying. 

SMACK!

His aim was a bit high, and the ball collided with the impenetrable muscular wall of Travis’ cobblestone abdominal muscles, bouncing off harmlessly to the sand below. 

SMACK! 

The second shot was closer, though still off the mark, smacking solidly into Travis’ colossal right thigh, again bouncing uselessly to the ground. The excited and cheerful crowd applauded each ball toss, even though they failed to reach their intended targets. 

“One more chance, kid,” Derek the Ring Master said with an encouraging smile. “Are you gonna make this big lug sing soprano or what?” 

A look of fierce determination came over the nerdy lad’s face, making him look even more boyishly handsome to Travis’ eyes. He wound up his pitch and sent the last ball flying through the air. 

THUMP!

The large rubber ball collided with surprising force directly into the footballer’s even larger left nut. The meat of Travis’ monstrously oversized testicles was freakishly, almost unnaturally dense, but was nevertheless slightly softer and more yielding than his stronger-than-steel muscles. The orange ball therefore compressed the huge gonad slightly against the wooden backboard before bouncing off to the rough sand below. 

The crowd gave a collective gasp at the surprising force behind the direct hit, but Travis only let out a slight grunt from the impact. The stud’s balls were easily just as tough as they were huge — as they had already proven from the several DOZEN impacts they’d already received today — and a blow that would have forced most men to cross their eyes and drop to their knees was barely more than a ‘love tap’ for this herculean hunk. Travis simply smiled around his gag and winked at the handsome young nerd, causing the lad’s face to break out into an adorable smile of its own as he left the sand pit, followed by the appreciative cheers of the crowd. 

“Good job! Good job!” Derek called out after the retreating nerd. “A few more hits like that, and I’m sure you’ll have this huge stud singing soprano in no time! Be sure and tell your friends, and come back soon!” 

6 comments:

  1. You know, I bet one could make an entire carnival out of just ballbusting games...

    A grip-strength tester where a stud's nuts take the place of the handles you squeeze, a punch-strength tester with some bull balls instead of a punching bag...
    Instead of popping a balloon by filling it with a water gun, you fill a bucket hanging from a jock's jewels.

    And of course, the classic strongman game where you swing a mallet to launch a weight upwards to strike a bell. But, of course, the bell is replaced by some oversized testes.
    Or just cut out the middle man and slam the mallet down on a hunk's crotch :p

    And that's not even mentioning popping balloons with darts...

    *ahem*
    Anyways, I guess I'm just saying I'm looking forward to this! Even if it's just the one attraction.

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    1. I have LONG wanted to make just such a story series! I've even begun writing one, and it's actually a SEQUEL to another story, "Jakey and the Wringer", where big, simple Jakey goes off to college with his cousins, and gets the ever-living CRAP beaten outta his balls! Very much a rough draft currently, however, but I hope to finish it someday.

      And that story WILL feature the classic strongman, ring-the-bell game. >:) (evil smile)

      I'm assuming you've seen the classic Etienne drawing series at a BDSM carnival? The bowling for balls image is my favorite... :)

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    2. I haven't seen that Etienne series actually, but I've enjoyed everything else by him that I've come across so I'll have to look it up!

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  2. Very excited to see where you go with this ;)

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    1. I'm seriously hoping that you'll be entertained. :)

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    2. By the way, I just listened to the audio clip that you've got linked to your bio page, and damn, that's HOT!! Those blows get progressively squishier as they progress, which can't be a good sign for the poor recipient's nuts... ;)

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